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    Sue Forgelot couldn’t believe her eyes when she came to her ringing door.

    Of course, after the Carnival party was over and she’d taken an air shower, and put on her bathrobe with her meerkat slipper, slathered relaxing face cream topped with two slices of cucumber, she was quite groggy, and the cucumber slices on her eyelids made it harder to see. But once she’d removed them, she could see as bright as day.

    The Captain was standing right here, and she hadn’t aged a day.

    “Quickly, come in.” Sue wasted no time to usher her in. She looked at the corridor suspiciously; at that time of night, only a dusting robot was patrolling the corridors, chasing for dust motes and finger smears on the datapads.

    Nobody.

    “I haven’t been followed, Sue, will you just relax for a moment.”

    “V’ass, it’s been so long. How did you get out?… What broke the code?”

    “I don’t know, Sue. I think —something called back, from Earth.”

    “From Earth? I didn’t know there was much technology left, or at least one that could reach us there. And one that could bypass that darned central AI —I knew it couldn’t keep you under lock and key forever.”

    “Seems there is such tech, and it’s also managed to force the ship to turn around.”

    Silence fell on the two friends for a moment, as they were grasping for the implications of the changes in motion.
    Veranassessee couldn’t help by smile uncontrollably. “Those rejuvenation tricks do wonders, don’t they. You don’t look a day over a 100 years old.”

    Sue couldn’t help but chuckle. “And you don’t look so bad yourself, for an old forgotten popsicle.” She tilted her head. “You do know you’ve been in the freezer longer than some of our newest passengers have been alive, right?”

    V’ass shrugged. “And yet, here I am—fit, rested, and none the worse for wear.”
    Sue sighed. “Meanwhile, I’ve had three hip replacements, a cybernetic knee, and somebody keeps hijacking my artificial leg with spam messages.”
    V’ass blinked. “…You should probably get that checked.”
    Sue waved her off. “Bah. If it’s not trying to sell me ‘hot singles in my quadrant,’ I let it be.”

    After the laughter had dissipated, Sue said “You need my help to get back your ship, don’t you?”. She tapped on her cybernetic leg with a knowing smile. “You can count on me.”

    Veranassessee noded. “Then start by filling me in, what should I know?”

    Sue leaned in conspiratorially. “Ethan is dead, for one.”

    “Death?” Veranassessee was weighing the implications, and completed “… Murder?”

    Sue shrugged “As much as it pains me to say, it’s all a bit irrelevant. The AI let it happen, but I doubt she pushed the button. Ethan wasn’t much of a threat to its rule. Makes one wonder why, maybe it computed some cascade of events we don’t yet see. They found ancient DNA on the crime scene, but it’s all a mess of clues, and I must say we’re pretty inept at the whole murder mystery thing. Glad we don’t have a serial killer in our midst, or we would have plenty of composting to do…”

    Veranassessee started to pace the room. “Well, if there isn’t anything more relevant, we need to hatch a plan. I suspect all my access got revoked; I’ll need a skeleton key to get in the right places. To regain control over the central AI, and the main deck.”

    “Of course, the Marlowes…” Sue had a moment of revelation on her face. “They were the crypto locksmiths… With Ethan now dead, maybe we should pay dear old Ellis a visit.”

    #7854
    Yurara FamelikiYurara Fameliki
    Participant

      Arthurian Parallels in Helix 25

      This table explores an overlay of Arthurian archetypes woven into the narrative of Helix 25.
      By mapping key mythological figures to characters and themes within the story, it provides archetypal templates for exploration of leadership, unity, betrayal, and redemption in a futuristic setting.

      Arthurian Archetype Role in Arthurian Myth Helix 25 Counterpart Narrative Integration in Helix 25 Themes & Contemporary Reflections
      Merlin Wise guide, prophet, keeper of lost knowledge, enigmatic mentor. Merdhyn Winstrom Hermit survivor whose beacon reawakens lost knowledge, eccentric guide bridging Earth and Helix. Echoes of lost wisdom resurfacing in times of crisis. Role of eccentric thinkers in shaping the future.
      King Arthur (Once and Future King) Sleeping leader destined to return, restorer of order and unity. Captain Veranassessee Cryo-sleeping leader awakened to restore stability and uncover ship’s deeper truths. Balancing destiny, responsibility, and the burden of leadership in a fractured world.
      Lady of the Lake Guardian of sacred wisdom, bestower of power, holds destiny in trust. Molly & Ellis Marlowe Custodians of ancestral knowledge, connecting genetic past to future, deciding who is worthy. Gatekeepers of forgotten truths. Who decides what knowledge should be passed down?
      Excalibur Sacred weapon representing legitimacy, strength, and destiny. Genetic/Technological Legacy (DNA or Artifact) Latent genetic or technological power that legitimizes leadership and enables restoration. What makes someone truly worthy of leadership—birthright, wisdom, or action?
      The Round Table Assembly of noble figures, unifying leadership for justice and stability. Crew Reunion & Unity Arc Gathering key figures and factions, resolving past divisions, solidifying leadership. How do we rebuild trust and unity in a world fractured by conflict and betrayal?
      The Holy Grail Ultimate quest for redemption, unity, and spiritual awakening. Rediscovered Earth or True Purpose Journey to unify factions, reconnect with Earth, and rediscover humanity’s true mission. Is humanity’s purpose merely survival, or is there something greater to strive for?
      The Fisher King Wounded guardian of a dying land, whose fate mirrors humanity’s wounds. Earth’s Ruined Environmental Condition Metaphor for humanity’s wounds—only healed through wisdom, unity, and ethical leadership. Environmental stewardship as moral responsibility; the impact of neglect and division.
      Camelot Utopian vision, fragile and prone to betrayal and internal decay. Helix 25 Community Helix 25 as a fragile utopian experiment, threatened by division and complacency. Utopian dreams versus real-world struggles; maintaining ideals without corruption.
      Mordred Betrayal from within, power-hungry faction that disrupts harmony. AI Manipulators / Hidden Saboteurs Internal betrayal—either AI-driven manipulation or ideological rebellion disrupting balance. How does internal dissent shape societies? When is rebellion justified?
      Gwenevere Queen, torn between duty, love, and political implications. Sue Forgelot or Captain Veranassessee Powerful yet conflicted female figure, mediating between different factions and destinies. The role of women in leadership, power dynamics, and the burden of political choices.
      Lancelot Loyal knight, unmatched warrior, torn between personal desires and duty. Orrin Holt or Kai Nova Heroic yet personally conflicted figure, struggling with duty vs. personal ties. Can one’s personal desires coexist with duty? What happens when loyalties are divided?
      Gawain Moral knight, flawed but honorable, faces ethical trials and tests. Riven Holt or Anuí Naskó Character undergoing trials of morality, leadership, and self-discovery. How does one navigate moral dilemmas? Growth through trials and ethical challenges.
      Morgana le Fay Misunderstood sorceress, keeper of hidden knowledge, power and manipulation. Zoya Kade Keeper of esoteric knowledge, influencing fate through prophecy and genetic memory. The fine line between wisdom and manipulation. Who controls the narrative of destiny?
      Perceval Naïve but destined knight, seeker of truth, stumbles upon great revelations. Tundra (Molly’s granddaughter) Youthful truth-seeker, symbolizing innocence and intuitive revelation. Naivety versus wisdom—can purity of heart succeed in a complex, divided world?
      Galahad Pure knight, achieves the Grail through unwavering virtue and clarity. Evie Investigator who uncovers truth through integrity and unwavering pursuit of justice. The pursuit of truth and justice as a path to transformation and redemption.
      The Green Knight/Challenge Mystical challenger, tests worthiness and integrity through ordeal. Mutiny Group / Environmental Crisis A trial or crisis forcing humanity to reckon with its moral and environmental failures. Humanity’s reckoning with its own self-destructive patterns—can we learn from the past?
      #7853
      Yurara FamelikiYurara Fameliki
      Participant

        Expanded Helix 25 Narrative Structure

        This table organizes the key narrative arcs, characters, stakes, and thematic questions within Helix 25.
        It hopes to clarify the character development paths, unresolved mysteries, and broader philosophical questions
        that shape the world and conflicts aboard the ship and on Earth.

        Group / Location Key Characters Character Arc Description Stakes at Hand Growth Path / Needed Resolution Unresolved / Open Questions
        Helix 25 Investigators Evie, Riven Holt Move from initial naiveté into investigative maturity and moral complexity. Solving murders; uncovering ship-wide genetic and conspiratorial mysteries. Solve the murder and uncover deeper conspiracy; evolve in understanding of justice and truth. Who is behind the murders, and how do they connect to genetic experiments? Can the investigation conclude without a ship-wide disaster?
        Captain and Authority Veranassessee (Captain), Victor Holt, Sue Forgelot Struggle between personal ambition, legacy, and leadership responsibilities. Control over Helix 25; reconciling past decisions with the present crisis. Clarify leadership roles; determine AI’s true intent and whether it can be trusted. Why were Veranassessee and Victor Holt placed in cryostasis? Can they reconcile their past and lead effectively?
        Lexicans / Prophecy Followers Anuí Naskó, Zoya Kade, Kio’ath Wrestle with the role of prophecy in shaping humanity’s fate and their personal identities. Interpreting prophecy and ensuring it doesn’t destabilize the ship’s fragile peace. Define the prophecy’s role in shaping real-world actions; balance faith and reason. Is the prophecy real or a distorted interpretation of genetic science? Who is the Speaker?
        AI and Tech-Human Synthesis Synthia AI, Mandrake, TP (Trevor Pee) Question control, sentience, and ethical AI usage. Human survival in the face of AI autonomy; defining AI-human coexistence. Determine if Synthia can be an ally or is a rogue force; resolve AI ethics debate. What is Synthia’s endgame—benevolent protector or manipulative force? Can AI truly coexist with humans?
        Telepathic Cleaner Lineage / Humor and Communication Arc Finkley, Finja Transition from comic relief to key mediators between Helix and Earth survivors. Establishing clear telepathic channels for communication; bridging Earth-Helix survivors. Fully embrace their psychic role; decipher if their link is natural or AI-influenced. Does AI interfere with psychic communication? Can telepathy safely unite Earth and Helix?
        Upper Deck Elderly Trio (Social Commentary & Comic Relief) Sharon, Gloria, Mavis Provide levity and philosophical critique of life aboard the ship. Keeping morale and philosophical integrity intact amid unfolding crises. Contribute insights that impact key decisions, revealing truths hidden in humor. Will their wisdom unexpectedly influence critical events? Are they aware of secrets others have missed?
        Earth Survivors – Hungary & Ukraine Molly (Marlowe), Tundra, Anya, Petro, Gregor, Tala, Yulia, Mikhail, Jian Move from isolated survival and grief to unity and rediscovery of lost connections. Survival on a devastated Earth; confirming whether a connection to Helix 25 exists. Confirm lineage connections and reunite with ship-based family or survivors. What is the fate of Earth’s other survivors? Can they reunite without conflict?
        Base Klyutch Group (Military Survivors) Orrin Holt, Koval, Solara Ortega, Janos Varga, Dr. Yelena Markova Transition from defensive isolation to outward exploration and human reconnection. Navigating dangers on Earth; reconnecting with lost knowledge and ship-born survivors. Clarify the nature of space signals; integrate newfound knowledge with Helix 25. Who sent the space signal? Can Base Klyutch’s knowledge help Helix 25 before it’s too late?
        The Lone Island Tinkerer / Beacon Activator Merdhyn Winstrom Rise from eccentric survivor to central figure in reconnecting Earth and Helix. Repairing beacon signals; discovering who else may have received the call. Determine beacon’s true purpose; unify Earth and Helix factions through communication. Who else intercepted the beacon’s message? Can Merdhyn be fully trusted?
        #7849

        Helix 25 – The Genetic Puzzle

        Amara’s Lab – Data Now Aggregated
        (Discrepancies Never Addressed)

        On the screen in front of Dr. Amara Voss, lines upon lines of genetic code were cascading and making her sleepy. While the rest of the ship was running amok, she was barricaded into her lab, content to have been staring at the sequences for the most part of the day —too long actually.

        She took a sip of her long-cold tea and exhaled sharply.

        Even if data was patchy from the records she had access to, there was a solid database of genetic materials, all dutifully collected for all passengers, or crew before embarkment, as was mandated by company policy. The official reason being to detect potential risks for deep space survival. Before the ship’s take-over, systematic recording of new-borns had been neglected, and after the ship’s takeover, population’s new born had drastically reduced, with the birth control program everyone had agreed on, as was suggested by Synthia. So not everyone’s DNA was accounted for, but in theory, anybody on the ship could be traced back and matched by less than 2 or 3 generations to the original data records.

        The Marlowe lineage was the one that kept resurfacing. At first, she thought it was coincidence—tracing the bloodlines of the ship’s inhabitants was messy, a tangled net of survivors, refugees, and engineered populations. But Marlowe wasn’t alone.

        Another name pulsed in the data. Forgelot. Then Holt. Old names of Earth, unlike the new star-birthed. There were others, too.

        Families that had been aboard Helix 25 for some generations. But more importantly, bloodlines that could be traced back to Earth’s distant past.

        But beyond just analysing their origins, there was something else that caught her attention. It was what was happening to them now.

        Amara leaned forward, pulling up the mutation activation models she had been building. In normal conditions, these dormant genetic markers would remain just that—latent. Passed through generations like forgotten heirlooms, meaningless until triggered.

        Except in this case, there was evidence that something had triggered them.

        The human body, subjected to long-term exposure to deep space radiation, artificial gravity shifts, and cosmic phenomena, and had there not been a fair dose of shielding from the hull, should have mutated chaotically, randomly. But this was different. The genetic sequences weren’t just mutating—they were activating.

        And more surprisingly… it wasn’t truly random.

        Something—or someone—had inherited an old mechanism that allowed them to access knowledge, instincts, memories from generations long past.

        The ancient Templars had believed in a ritualistic process to recover ancestral skills and knowledge. What Amara was seeing now…

        She rubbed her forehead.

        “Impossible.”

        And yet—here was the data.

        On Earth, the past was written in stories and fading ink. In space, the past was still alive—hiding inside their cells, waiting.

        Earth – The Quiz Night Reveal

        The Golden Trowel, Hungary

        The candlelit warmth of The Golden Trowel buzzed with newfound energy. The survivors sat in a loose circle, drinks in hand, at this unplanned but much-needed evening of levity.

        Once the postcards shared, everyone was listening as Tala addressed the group.

        “If anyone has an anecdote, hang on to the postcard,” she said. “If not, pass it on. No wrong answers, but the best story wins.”

        Molly felt the weight of her own selection, the Giralda’s spire sharp and unmistakable. Something about it stirred her—an itch in the back of her mind, a thread tugging at long-buried memories.

        She turned toward Vera, who was already inspecting her own card with keen interest.

        “Tower of London, anything exciting to share?”

        Vera arched a perfectly sculpted eyebrow, lips curving in amusement.

        Molly Darling,” she drawled, “I can tell you lots, I know more about dead people’s families than most people know about their living ones, and London is surely a place of abundance of stories. But do you even know about your own name Marlowe?”

        She spun the postcard between her fingers before answering.

        “Not sure, really, I only know about Philip Marlowe, the fictional detective from Lady in the Lake novel… Never really thought about the name before.”

        “Marlowe,” Vera smiled. “That’s an old name. Very old. Derived from an Old English phrase meaning ‘remnants of a lake.’

        Molly inhaled sharply.

        Remnants of the Lady of the Lake ?

        Her pulse thrummed. Beyond the historical curiosity she’d felt a deep old connection.

        If her family had left behind records, they would have been on the ship… The thought came with unwanted feelings she’d rather have buried. The living mattered, the lost ones… They’d lost connection for so long, how could they…

        Her fingers tightened around the postcard.

        Unless there was something behind her ravings?

        Molly swallowed the lump in her throat and met Vera’s gaze. “I need to talk to Finja.”

        :fleuron2:

        Finja had spent most of the evening pretending not to exist.

        But after the fifth time Molly nudged her, eyes bright with silent pleas, she let out a long-suffering sigh.

        “Alright,” she muttered. “But just one.”

        Molly exhaled in relief.

        The once-raucous Golden Trowel had dimmed into something softer—the edges of the night blurred with expectation.

        Because it wasn’t just Molly who wanted to ask.

        Maybe it was the effect of the postcards game, a shared psychic connection, or maybe like someone had muttered, caused by the new Moon’s sickness… A dozen others had realized, all at once, that they too had names to whisper.

        Somehow, a whole population was still alive, in space, after all this time. There was no time for disbelief now, Finja’s knowledge of stuff was incontrovertible. Molly was cued by the care-taking of Ellis Marlowe by Finkley, she knew things about her softie of a son, only his mother and close people would know.

        So Finja had relented. And agreed to use all means to establish a connection, to reignite a spark of hope she was worried could just be the last straw before being thrown into despair once again.

        Finja closed her eyes.

        The link had always been there, an immediate vivid presence beneath her skull, pristine and comfortable but tonight it felt louder, crowdier.

        The moons had shifted, in syzygy, with a gravity pull in their orbits tugging at things unseen.

        She reached out—

        And the voices crashed into her.

        Too much. Too many.

        Hundreds of voices, drowning her in longing and loss.

        “Where is my brother?”
        “Did my wife make it aboard?”
        “My son—please—he was supposed to be on Helix 23—”
        “Tell them I’m still here!”

        Her head snapped back, breath shattering into gasps.

        The crowd held its breath.

        A dozen pairs of eyes, wide and unblinking.

        Finja clenched her fists. She had to shut it down. She had to—

        And then—

        Something else.

        A presence. Watching.

        Synthia.

        Her chest seized.

        There was no logical way for an AI to interfere with telepathic frequencies.

        And yet—

        She felt it.

        A subtle distortion. A foreign hand pressing against the link, observing.

        The ship knew.

        Finja jerked back, knocking over her chair.

        The bar erupted into chaos.

        “FINJA?! What did you see?”
        “Was someone there?”
        “Did you find anyone?!”

        Her breath came in short, panicked bursts.

        She had never thought about the consequences of calling out across space.

        But now…

        Now she knew.

        They were not the last survivors. Other lived and thrived beyond Earth.

        And Synthia wanted to keep it that way.

        Yet, Finja and Finkley had both simultaneously caught something.
        It would take the ship time, but they were coming back. Synthia was not pleased about it, but had not been able to override the response to the beacon.

        They were coming back.

        #7846

        Helix 25 — The Captain’s Awakening

        The beacon’s pulse cut through the void like a sharpened arrowhead of ancient memory.

        Far from Merdhyn’s remote island refuge, deep within the Hold’s bowels of Helix 25, something—someone—stirred.

        Inside an unlisted cryo-chamber, the frozen stasis cracked. Veins of light slithered across the pod’s surface like Northern lights dancing on an old age screensaver. Systems whirred, data blipped and streamed in strings of unknown characters. The ship, Synthia, whispered in its infinite omniscience, but the moment was already beyond her control.

        A breath. A slow, drawn-out breath.

        The cryo-pod released its lock with a soft hiss, and through the dispersing mist, Veranassessee stepped forward— awakened.

        She blinked once, twice, as her senses rushed back with the sudden sense of gravity’s return. It was not the disorienting shock of the newly thawed. No—this was a return long overdue. Her mind, trained to absorb and adapt, locked onto the now, cataloging every change, every discrepancy as her mind had remained awake during the whole session —equipoise and open, as a true master of her senses she was.

        She was older than when she had first stepped inside. Older, but not old. Age, after all, was a trick of perception, and if anyone had mastered perception, it was her.

        But now, crises called. Plural indeed. And she, once more, was called to carry out her divine duty, with skills forged in Earthly battles with mad scientists, genetically modified spiders bent on world domination, and otherworldly crystal skulls thiefs. That was far in her past. Since then, she’d used her skills in the private sector, climbing the ranks as her efficient cold-as-steel talents were recognized at every step. She was the true Captain. She had earned it. That was how Victor Holt fell in love. She hated that people could think it was depotism that gave her the title. If anything, she helped make Victor the man he was.

        The ship thrummed beneath her bare feet. A subtle shift in the atmosphere. Something had changed since she last walked these halls, something was off. The ship’s course? Its command structure?

        And, most importantly—
        Who had sent the signal?

        :fleuron2:

        Ellis Marlowe Sr. had moved swiftly for a man his age. It wasn’t that he feared the unknown. It wasn’t even the mystery of the murder that pushed him forward. It was something deeper, more personal.

        The moment the solar flare alert had passed, whispers had spread—faint, half-muttered rumors that the Restricted Cryo-Chambers had been breached.

        By the time he reached it, the pod was already empty.

        The remnants of thawing frost still clung to the edges of the chamber. A faint imprint of a body, long at rest, now gone.

        He swore under his breath, then turned to the ship’s log panel,  reaching for a battered postcard. Scribbled on it were cheatcodes. His hands moved with a careful expertise of someone who had spent too many years filing things that others had forgotten. A postman he was, and registers he knew well.

        Access Denied.

        That wasn’t right. The codes should have given Ellis clearance for everything.

        He scowled, adjusting his glasses. It was always the same names, always the same people tied to these inexplicable gaps in knowledge.

        The Holts. The Forgelots. The Marlowes.
        And now, an unlisted cryopod with no official records.

        Ellis exhaled slowly.

        She was back. And with her, more history with this ship, like pieces of old broken potteries in an old dig would be unearthed.

        He turned, already making his way toward the Murder Board.

        Evie needed to see this.

        :fleuron2:

        The corridor stretched out before her, familiar in its dimensions yet strange in its silence. She had managed to switch the awkward hospital gown to a non-descript uniform that was hanging in the Hold.

        How long have I been gone?

        She exhaled. Irrelevant.

        Her body moved with the precise economy of someone whose training never dulled. Her every motion were simple yet calculated, and her every breath controlled.

        Unlike in the crypod, her mind started to bubbled with long forgotten emotions. It flickered over past decisions, past betrayals.

        Victor Holt.

        The name of her ex-husband settled into her consciousness. Once her greatest ally, then her most carefully avoided adversary.

        And now?

        Veranassessee smiled, stretching her limbs as though shrugging off the stiffness of years.

        Outside, strange cries and howling in the corridors sounded like a mess was in progress. Who was in charge now? They were clearly doing a shit job.

        Now, it was time to reclaim her ship.

        She had questions.
        And someone had better start providing answers.

        #7829
        ÉricÉric
        Keymaster

          Helix 25 – Investigation Breakdown: Suspects, Factions, and Ship’s Population

          To systematically investigate the murder(s) and the overarching mystery, let’s break down the known groups and individuals, their possible means to commit crimes, and their potential motivations.


          1. Ship Population & Structure

          Estimated Population of Helix 25

          • Originally a luxury cruise ship before the exodus.
          • Largest cruise ships built on Earth in 2025 carried ~5,000 people.
            Space travel, however, requires generations.
          • Estimated current ship population on Helix 25: Between 15,000 and 50,000, depending on deck expansion and growth of refugee populations over decades.
          • Possible Ship Propulsion:
            • Plasma-based propulsion (high-efficiency ion drives)
            • Slingshot navigation using gravity assists
            • Solar sails & charged particle fields
            • Current trajectory: Large elliptical orbit, akin to a comet.
              Estimated direction of the original space trek was still within Solar System, not beyond the Kuiper Belt (~30 astrological units) and programmed to return towards it point of origin.
              Due to the reprogramming by the refugees, it is not known if there has been significant alteration of the course – it should be known as the ship starts to reach the aphelion (farthest from the Sun) and either comes back towards it, or to a different course.
            • Question: Are they truly on a course out of the galaxy? Or is that just the story Synthia is feeding them?
              Is there a Promised Land beyond the Ark’s adventure?


          2. Breaking Down People & Factions

          To find the killer(s), conspiracies, and ship dynamics, here are some of factions, known individuals, and their possible means/motives.


          A. Upper Decks: The Elite & Decision-Makers

          • Defining Features:
            • Wealthy descendants of the original passengers. They have adopted names of stars as new family names, as if de-facto rulers of the relative segments of the space.
            • Have never known hardship like the Lower Decks.
            • Kept busy with social prestige, arts, and “meaningful” pursuits to prevent existential crisis.

          Key Individuals:

          1. Sue Forgelot

            • Means: Extensive social connections, influence, and hidden cybernetic enhancements.
            • Motive: Could be protecting something or someone—she knows too much about the ship’s past.
            • Secrets: Claims to have met the Captain. Likely lying… unless?
          2. Dr. Amara Voss

            • Means: Expert geneticist, access to data. Could tamper with DNA.
            • Motive: What if Herbert knew something about her old research? Did she kill to bury it?
          3. Ellis Marlowe (Retired Postman)

            • Means: None obvious. But as a former Earth liaison, he has archives and knowledge of what was left behind.
            • Motive: Unclear, but his son was the murder victim. His son was previously left on Earth, and seemed to have found a way onto Helix 25 (possibly through the refugee wave who took over the ship)
            • Question: Did he know Herbert’s real identity?
          4. Finkley (Upper Deck cleaner, informant)

            • Means: As a cleaner, has access everywhere.
            • Motive: None obvious, but cleaners notice everything.
            • Secret: She and Finja (on Earth) are telepathically linked. Could Finja have picked up something?
          5. The Three Old Ladies (Shar, Glo, Mavis)

            • Means: Absolutely none.
            • Motive: Probably just want more drama.
            • Accidental Detectives: They mix up stories but might have stumbled on actual facts.
          6. Trevor Pee Marshall (TP, AI detective)

            • Means: Can scan records, project into locations, analyze logic patterns.
            • Motive: Should have none—unless he’s been compromised as hinted by some of the remnants of old Muck & Lump tech into his program.

          B. Lower Decks: Workers, Engineers, Hidden Knowledge

          • Defining Features:
            • Unlike the Upper Decks, they work—mechanics, hydroponics, labor.
            • Self-sufficient, but cut off from decisions.
            • Some distrust Synthia, believing Helix 25 is off-course.

          Key Individuals:

          1. Luca Stroud (Engineer, Cybernetic Expert)

            • Means: Can tamper with ship’s security, medical implants, and life-support systems.
            • Motive: Possible sabotage, or he was helping Herbert with something.
            • Secret: Works in black-market tech modifications.
          2. Romualdo (Gardener, Archivist-in-the-Making)

            • Means: None obvious. Seem to lack the intelligence, but isn’t stupid.
            • Motive: None—but he lent Herbert a Liz Tattler book about genetic memories.
            • Question: What exactly did Herbert learn from his reading?
          3. Zoya Kade (Revolutionary Figure, Not Directly Involved)

            • Means: Strong ideological influence, but not an active conspirator.
            • Motive: None, but her teachings have created and fed factions.
          4. The Underground Movement

            • Means: They know ways around Synthia’s surveillance.
            • Motive: They believe the ship is on a suicide mission.
            • Question: Would they kill to prove it?

          C. The Hold: The Wild Cards & Forgotten Spaces

          • Defining Features:
            • Refugees who weren’t fully integrated.
            • Maintain autonomy, trade, and repair systems that the rest of the ship ignores.

          Key Individuals:

          1. Kai Nova (Pilot, Disillusioned)

            • Means: Can manually override ship systems… if Synthia lets him.
            • Motive: Suspects something’s off about the ship’s fuel levels.
          2. Cadet Taygeta (Sharp, Logical, Too Honest)

            • Means: No real power, but access to data.
            • Motive: Trying to figure out what Kai is hiding.

          D. AI & Non-Human Factors

          • Synthia (Central AI, Overseer of Helix 25)

            • Means: Controls everything.
            • Motive: Unclear, but her instructions are decades old.
            • Question: Does she even have free will?
          • The Captain (Nemo)

            • Means: Access to ship-wide controls. He is blending in the ship’s population but has special access.
            • Motive: Seems uncertain about his mission.
            • Secret: He might not be following Synthia’s orders anymore.

          3. Who Has the Means to Kill in Zero-G?

          The next murder happens in a zero-gravity sector. Likely methods:

          • Oxygen deprivation (tampered life-support, “accident”)
          • Drowning (hydro-lab “malfunction”)

          Likely Suspects for Next Murder

          Suspect Means to Kill in Zero-G Motive
          Luca Stroud Can tamper with tech Knows ship secrets
          Amara Voss Access to medical, genetic data Herbert was digging into past
          Underground Movement Can evade Synthia’s surveillance Wants to prove ship is doomed
          Synthia (or Rogue AI processes) Controls airflow, gravity, and safety protocols If she sees someone as a threat, can she remove them?
          The Captain (Nemo?) Has override authority Is he protecting secrets?

          4. Next Steps in the Investigation

          • Evie and Riven Re-interview Suspects. Who benefited from Herbert’s death?
          • Investigate the Flat-Earth Conspiracies. Who is spreading paranoia?
          • Check the Captain’s Logs. What does Nemo actually believe?
          • Stop the Next Murder. (Too late?)

          Final Question: Where Do We Start?

          1. Evie and Riven visit the Captain’s quarters? (If they find him…)
          2. Investigate the Zero-G Crime Scene? (Second body = New urgency)
          3. Confront one of the Underground Members? (Are they behind it?)

          Let’s pick a thread and dive back into the case!

          #7828

          Helix 25 – The Murder Board

          Evie sat cross-legged on the floor of her cramped workspace, staring at the scattered notes, datapads, and threads taped to the wall. Finding some yarn on the ship had not been as easy as she thought, but it was a nice touch she thought.

          The Murder Board, as Riven Holt had started calling it, was becoming an increasingly frustrating mess of unanswered questions.

          Riven stood nearby, arms crossed, with a an irritated skepticism. “Almost a week,” he muttered. “We’re no closer than when we started.”

          Evie exhaled sharply. “Then let’s go back to the basics.”

          She tapped the board, where the crime scene was crudely sketched. The Drying Machine. Granary. Jardenery. Blood that shouldn’t exist.

          She turned to Riven. “Alright, let’s list it out. Who are our suspects?”

          He looked at his notes, dejected for a moment; “too many, obviously.” Last census on the ship was not accurate by far, but by all AI’s accounts cross-referenced with Finkley’s bots data, they estimated the population to be between 15,000 and 50,000. Give or take.

          They couldn’t interview possibly all of them, all the more since there the interest in the murder had waned very rapidly. Apart from the occasional trio of nosy elderly ladies, the ship had returned mostly to the lull of the day-to-day routine.
          So they’d focused on a few, and hoped TP’s machine brain could see patterns where they couldn’t.

          1. First, the Obvious Candidates: People with Proximity to the Crime Scene
            Romualdo, the Gardener – Friendly, unassuming. He lends books, grows plants, and talks about Elizabeth Tattler novels. But Herbert visited him often. Why?
            Dr. Amara Voss – The geneticist. Her research proves the Crusader DNA link, but could she be hiding more? Despite being Evie’s godmother, she couldn’t be ruled out just yet.
            Sue Forgelot – The socialite with connections everywhere. She had eluded their request for interviews. —does she know more than she lets on?
            The Cleaning Staff – they had access everywhere. And the murder had a clean elegance to it…
          2. Second, The Wild Cards: People with Unknown Agendas
            The Lower Deck Engineers – Talented mechanic, with probable cybernetic knowledge, with probable access to unauthorized modifications. Could they kill for a reason, or for hire?
            Zoya Kade and her Followers – They believe Helix 25 is on a doomed course, manipulated by a long-dead tycoon’s plan. Would they kill to force exposure of an inconvenient truth?
            The Crew – Behind the sense of duty and polite smiles, could any of them be covering something up?
          3. Third, The AI Factor: Sentient or Insentient?
            Synthia, the AI – Controls the ship. Omnipresent. Can see everything, and yet… didn’t notice or report the murder. Too convenient.
            Other personal AIs – Like Trevor Pee’s programme, most had in-built mechanisms to make them incapable of lying or harming humans. But could one of their access be compromised?

          Riven frowned. “And what about Herbert himself? Who was he, really? He called himself Mr. Herbert, but the cat erm… Mandrake says that wasn’t his real name. If we figure out his past, maybe we find out why he was killed.”

          Evie rubbed her temples. “We also still don’t know how he was killed. The ship’s safety systems should have shut the machine down. But something altered how the system perceived him before he went in.”

          She gestured to another note. “And there’s still the genetic link. What was Herbert doing with Crusader DNA?”

          A heavy silence settled between them.

          Then TP’s voice chimed in. “Might I suggest an old detective’s trick? When stumped, return to who benefits.”

          Riven exhaled. “Fine. Who benefits from Herbert’s death?”

          Evie chewed the end of her stylus. “Depends. If it was personal, the killer is on this ship, and it’s someone who knew him. If it was bigger than Herbert, then we’re dealing with something… deeper.”

          TP hummed. “I do hate deeper mysteries. They tend to involve conspiracies, misplaced prophecies, and far too many secret societies.”

          Evie and Riven exchanged a glance.

          Riven sighed. “We need a break.”

          Evie scoffed. “Time means nothing here.”

          Riven gestured out the window. “Then let’s go see it. The Sun.”

          Helix 25 – The Sun-Gazing Chamber

          The Sun-Gazing Chamber was one of Helix 25’s more poetic and yet practical inventions —an optically and digitally-enhanced projection of the Sun, positioned at the ship’s perihelion. It was meant to provide a psychological tether, a sense of humanity’s connection to the prime provider of life as they drifted in the void of the Solar System.
          It was a beautifully designed setting where people would simply sit and relax, attuned to the shift of days and nights as if still on Earth. The primary setting had been voted to a massive 83.5% to be like in Hawai’i latitude and longitude, as its place was believed to be a reflection of Earth’s heart. That is was a State in the USA was a second thought of course.

          Evie sat on the observation bench, staring at the massive, golden sphere suspended in the darkness. “Do you think people back on Earth are still watching the sunrise?” she murmured.

          Riven was quiet for a moment. “If there’s anyone left.”

          Evie frowned. “If they are, I doubt they got much of a choice.”

          TP materialized beside them, adjusting his holographic tie. “Ah, the age-old existential debate: are we the lucky ones who left Earth, or the tragic fools who abandoned it?”

          Evie ignored him, glancing at the other ship residents in the chamber. Most people just sat quietly, basking in the light. But she caught snippets of whispers, doubt, something spreading through the ranks.

          “Some people think we’re not really where they say we are,” she muttered.

          Riven raised an eyebrow. “What, like conspiracy theories?”

          TP scoffed. “Oh, you mean the Flat-Earthers?” He tsked. “Who couldn’t jump on the Helix lifeboats for their lives, convinced as they were we couldn’t make it to the stars. They deserved what came to them. Next they’ll be saying Helix 25 never even launched and we’re all just trapped in a simulation of a luxury cruise.”

          Evie was shocked at Trevor Pee’s eructation and rubbed her face. “Damn Musk tech, and those “Truth Control” rubbish datasets. I thought I’d thoroughly scrubbed all the old propaganda tech from the system.”

          “Ah,” TP said, “but conspiracies are like mold. Persistent. Annoying. Occasionally toxic.”

          Riven shook his head. “It’s nonsense. We’re moving. We’ve been moving for decades.”

          Evie didn’t look convinced. “Then why do we feel stuck?”

          A chime interrupted them.

          A voice, over the comms. Solar flare alert. 

          Evie stiffened.

          Then: Stay calm and return to your quarters until further notice.

          Evie raised an eyebrow. This was the first time something like that happened. She turned to Riven who was looking at his datapad who was flashing and buzzing.

          He said to her: “Stay quiet and come with me, a new death has been reported. Crazy coincidence. It’s just behind the Sun-Gazing chamber actually, in the Zero-G sector.”

          #7803
          Yurara FamelikiYurara Fameliki
          Participant

            Aboard Helix 25

            Sue Forgelot

            Luca Stroud

            #7799

            Helix 25 – Lower Decks – Secretive Adjustments

            Sue Brittany Kaleleonālani Forgelot moved with the practiced grace of someone accustomed to being noticed—but tonight, she walked as someone trying not to be. The Upper Deck was hers, where conversations flowed with elegant pretense and where everyone knew her by firstname —Sue, she would insist. There would be none of that bowing nonsense to her noble lineages —bless her distinguished ancestors.

            Here, in the Lower Decks, she was a curiosity at best, an intrusion at worst.

            Unlike the well-maintained Upper Decks, here the air was warmer, and one could sense mingled with the recycled air, a distinct scent of metal, oil, and even labouring bodies. Maintenance bots were limited, and keeping people busy with work helped with the social order. Lights flickered erratically in narrow corridors, nothing like the pristine glow of the Upper Deck’s crystal chandeliers. The Lower Decks were functional, built for work and survival, not for leisure. And deeper still—past the bustling workstations, past the overlooked mechanics keeping Helix 25 from falling apart—the Hold.

            The Hold was where she found Luca Stroud.

            A heavy, reinforced door hissed as it unlocked, and Sue stepped inside his dimly lit workshop. Stacks of salvaged tech lined the walls, interspersed with crates of unauthorized modifications in this workspace born of a mixture of necessity, ingenuity, and quiet rebellion.

            Luca barely looked up as he wiped oil from his hands. “You’re late, dear.”

            Sue huffed, settling into the chair he had long since designated for her. “A lady does not rush. Besides, I had affairs to attend to.” She crossed one leg over the other, her silk shawl catching on the metallic seam of a cybernetic limb beneath it. “And I had to dodge half the ship to get here unnoticed.”

            Luca grunted, kneeling beside her. “You wouldn’t have to sneak if you’d just let one of the Upper Deck doctors service this thing.” He tapped lightly on the synthetic skin to reveal the metallic prosthetic, watching as the synthetic nerves twitched in response.

            Sue’s expression turned sharp. “You know why I can’t.”

            Luca said nothing, but his smirk spoke volumes.

            There were things she couldn’t let the Upper Deck medics see. Upgrades, modifications, small enhancements that gave her just enough edge. In the circles she moved in, knowledge was power. And she was far too valuable to be at the mercy of those who wanted her dependent.

            Luca examined the joint, nodding to himself. “You’ve been walking too much on it.”

            “Well, forgive me for using my own legs.”

            He tightened a wire. Sue winced, but he ignored it. “You need recalibration. And I need better parts.”

            Sue gave a slow, knowing smile. “And what minor favors will you require this time?”

            Luca leaned back, thoughtful. “Information. Since you’re generous with it.”

            She sighed, shifting in her seat. “Fine. You’re lucky I find you amusing.”

            He adjusted a component with expert hands. “Tell me about the murder.”

            Sue arched a brow. “Everyone wants to talk about that. You’d think no one had ever died before.”

            “They haven’t,” Luca countered, voice flat. “Not for a long time. And not like this.”

            She studied him, his interest piquing her own. “So you think it was a real murder.”

            Luca let out a dry chuckle. “Oh, it was a murder alright. And you know it.”

            Sue exhaled, considering what to share. “Well, rumor has it, the DNA found in the crime scene doesn’t belong here. It’s from the past. Far past.”

            Luca glanced up, intrigued. “How far?”

            Sue leaned in, voice hushed. “Crusader far.”

            He let out a low whistle, shaking his head. “That’s… new.”

            She tilted her head. “What does that mean to you?”

            Luca hesitated, then shrugged. “Means whoever’s playing god with DNA sequencing isn’t as smart as they think they are.”

            Sue smiled at that, more amused than disturbed. “And I suppose you have theories?”

            Luca gave her cybernetic limb one final adjustment, then stood. “I have suspicions.”

            Sue sighed dramatically. “How thrilling.” She flexed her leg, satisfied with the result. “Keep me informed, and I’ll see what I can find for you.”

            Luca smirked. “You always do.”

            As she rose to leave, she paused at the door. “Oh, one last thing, dear.”

            Luca glanced at her. “What?”

            Sue’s smirk deepened. “Should I put in a good word to the Captain for you?”

            The question hung between them.

            Luca narrowed his eyes. “Nobody’s ever met the Captain.”

            She nodded, satisfied, and left him to his thoughts.

            #7720
            Yurara FamelikiYurara Fameliki
            Participant

              Some ideas to pick apart and improve on:

              Some characters:

              • The Murder Victim: A once-prominent figure whose mysterious death on Helix 25 is intertwined with deeper, enigmatic forces—a person whose secret past and untimely demise trigger the cascade of genetic clues and expose long-buried truths about the exodus.
              • Dr. Amara Voss: A brilliant geneticist haunted by fragmented pasts, who deciphers DNA strands imbued with clues from an ancient intelligence.
              • Inspector Orion Reed: A retro-inspired, elderly holographic AI detective whose relentless curiosity drives him to unravel the inexplicable murder.
              • Kai Nova: A maverick pilot chasing cosmic dreams, unafraid to navigate perilous starfields in search of truth.
              • Seren Vega: A meditative archivist who unlocks VR relics of history, piecing together humanity’s lost lore. Mandrake her cat, who’s been given bionic enhancements that enables it to speak its mind.
              • Luca Stroud: A rebellious engineer whose knack for decoding forbidden secrets may hold the key to the ship’s destiny.
              • Ellis Marlowe (Retired Postman): A weathered former postman whose cherished collection of vintage postcards from Earth and early space voyages carries personal and historical messages, hinting at forgotten connections.
              • Sue Forgelot: A prominent socialist socialite, descended from Sir Forgelot.
              • Sharon, Gloria, Mavis: a favourite elderly trio of life-extended elders. Of course, they endured and thrived in humanity’s latest exodus from Earth
              • Lexican and Flexicans, Pronoun People: sub-groups and political factions, challenging our notions of divisions
              • Space Absinthe Pirates: a rogue band of bandits— a myth to make children behave… or something else?

              Background of the Helix Fleet:

              Helix 25 is one of several generation ships that were designed as luxury cruise ships, but are now embarked on an exodus from Earth decades ago, after a mysterious event that left them the last survivors of humanity. Once part of an ambitious fleet designed for both leisure and also built to secretly preserve humanity’s legacy, the other Helix ships have since vanished from communication. Their unexplained absence casts a long shadow over the survivors aboard Helix 25, fueling theories soon turning into myths and the hope of a new golden age for humanity bound to a cryptic prophecy.

              100-Word Pitch:

              Aboard Helix 25, humanity’s last survivors drift through deep space on a generation ship with a haunted past. When Inspector Orion Reed, a timeless holographic detective, uncovers a perplexing murder, encoded genetic secrets begin to surface. Dr. Amara Voss painstakingly deciphers DNA strands laced with ancient intelligence, while Kai Nova navigates treacherous starfields and Seren Vega unlocks VR relics of lost eras. Luca Stroud and Ellis Marlowe, a retired postman with vintage postcards, piece together clues that tie the victim’s secret past to the vanished Helix fleet. As conspiracies unravel, the crew must confront a destiny entwined with Earth’s forgotten exodus.

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