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  • #4106

    “Look,” Ricardo pointed out to Bossy, “Seems you’re worrying too much, I just got a SMS from Connie, they’re all fine.”

    “Glad they’re putting the newspaper subsides to good use…” snickered Bossy, thinking about the rather large phone bills Hilda used to put on her expenses. She could only wish that Connie would be more reasonable with overseas phone calls. “Anyway,” Bossy sighed “what is it exactly that she managed to say in less than 160 characters?”

    Ricardo fumbled over his phone’s message history “She, she just replied… hang on, here:”

    We're fine. Sophie is her usual weird, and we are following a lead to a nearby clinic.
    PS: Food's horrid, and the latest fashion is from the 60s.

    “You stupid boy!” Bossy jumped out of her chair. “Don’t you see she’s sending you a clue. Not is all fine. There’s only one explanation for that 60s fashion resurgence, and you better hope it doesn’t smell like coconut!”

    #4095

    In reply to: Scrying the Word Cloud

    Jib
    Participant

      roberto rubbish tell
      beginning package close hotel island
      character work wondering answer
      start bar
      latest business told idle call bossy play

      #4093

      It didn’t take too long to Ed Steam to find her. By his count, only a few hundred reality reboots.

      It could have been more, but keeping a steady count of all the trigger-cackles was tricky.
      He never was quite the same person each time. Hopefully, he’d noticed after the 57th reboot that something new had happened — since that particular reboot, it had seemed easier to keep track of his identity from reboot to reboot.

      As if Zero-point Bea had realized something, and honed her entangling capabilities.

      Ed had tracked her at the border. Funnily, nowadays she was more or less the only unchanging thing in the whole universe.
      She had rented a small apartment near the border, and was offering reallocation services on an ad-hoc basis.

      There were still many characters refugees who were looking for a story placement, and that’s what she provided them.

      Ed was there for one thing: termitate her. His reality now was quite different from the one he originated, but despite all the changes, he was still in charge of preventing the surges wherever they happened.
      It was a moral dilemma. Already so many persons had been displaced by the cackling surges and Bea’s uncontrolled shifting realities. Not even a map-dancer could now keep track of all the transfocal encounters and reallocation. The world was a much different place now, on shifting grounds and sandy whorls with no minute of fame.

      Ed was next in line, dreading that he couldn’t get to her before the next cackling reboot.
      The success of his mission was paramount to the security of the fabric of reality.

      #4085

      In reply to: Scrying the Word Cloud

      ÉricÉric
      Keymaster

        bossy realized continued wait behind
        seemed character ask imagination opened
        started doctor leave business news often
        noticed hand cleaning tart certain

        F LoveF Love
        Participant

          NOTES FROM GROUP DISCUSSION:

          [unnamed protagonist] finds themself in a coma, but they don’t realize it. It’s like they’re in a dream state, moving through worlds, gradually discovering their past and what’s happening. The person knows that they’re trying to find their way home, which in reality is them trying to wake up.

          Once they remember their past and what happened leading up to the coma, they wake up…but remember nothing.

          So, as I was trying to structure this, I initially wanted the first book to be their normal waking life and the second book being the coma and the third book being post coma and relearning stuff. But then I figured it would be best to combine the first and second books.

          I wanted the reader to start out confused, just like they would be and gradually learn the back story as they went

          The only thing is, that would mean that this thread has to remain written as coming from their perspective

          we are all writing about ONE character essentially. obviously there are gonna be other characters, but the main thread is this one person

          feel free to incorporate any and all previous characters and locations from your other threads. The protagonist will be moving through them. So he/she finds themselves in these other worlds.

          They’re being swept up into an adventure right from the start without knowing a thing

          let’s drop them into the middle of something exciting

          It’s any time
          It’s a big dream
          In real life, the protagonist is in a coma right now

          But, also, you’ll have a lot of freedom to create those on the spot because neither you nor the reader nor the main character knows them until you write them

          The characters in this story won’t have too much staying power because the main character is moving through so many worlds. Nearly everyone is incidental,

          unless characters appear that are central to the main characters ongoing story, like a nurse for example or family

          At max, there might be two or three reoccurring characters that tend to pop in more often than not as helpers
          Oh, yeah, family from the back story would come in to play a lot

          #4073

          In reply to: Scrying the Word Cloud

          TracyTracy
          Participant

            situation talking
            certain food
            themselves short paper comment
            nor missed island night self stopped working
            lead concrete character help thinking ask

            #4066
            ÉricÉric
            Keymaster

              Godfrey kind of liked the silence of late.

              Finnley under the guise of regular taichi practice, had been actually quite busy ushering the randomly scurrying forgotten characters out of the house into the wild, with a broomstick and a mild dose of threat.

              The Splendor Manor had fell pleasantly silent. Too silent for Liz probably, who had started to notice and launch back into gears her creaking storytelling joints.

              #4030
              TracyTracy
              Participant

                “It’s not very comfortable” admitted Godfrey.

                “I’m toying with the idea of introducing it as a new trend in the other thread.”

                “I say, Liz, that’s just cruel! Making all the male characters waddle around wearing codpieces, and not be able to scratch and fumble with the actual cod?”

                “On second thoughts,” replied Liz, “Maybe I won’t. I dread to think where this is leading.”

                #4011

                In reply to: Scrying the Word Cloud

                TracyTracy
                Participant

                  round aunt characters matter
                  talk working latest ascension run
                  honey open mission perhaps
                  leader close free reading window
                  land cleaning times

                  #4003

                  “You rang, madam?” asked the butler, adjusting his oversized blue turban.

                  “Ah, Lazuli! How are you settling in?” asked Liz.

                  “I’ve only just been written into this thread, madam, moments ago. Do I have to call you madam?”

                  “Only when you want to be rude, according to Finnley,” Liz said, glancing fondly at the unconscious cleaner.

                  “This thread appears to be going nowhere, madam,” Lazuli remarked thoughtfully.

                  “I can write Fanella into it if you like,” Liz quickly tried to entice him to stay.

                  Lazuli Galore’s eyes lit up. “Did somebody mention something about sexing the story up a bit?” he asked hopefully. “We’d be the perfect characters for that.”

                  “Well, if its ok with Finnley, it’s ok with me. If you can wake her, we can ask her now.”

                  #3988
                  TracyTracy
                  Participant

                    “You simply can’t imagine the shock when I realized it was my character,” Liz told Godfrey moments later.

                    #3987

                    Jolly glad Evangeline’s not my character, Liz said, to nobody in particular.

                    #3985
                    TracyTracy
                    Participant

                      “There’s a visitor in the drawing room by the name of Bubbles, your highness,” Finnley said with a mock curtsy.

                      “What on earth are you doing down there, Finnley, pretending to be a red dwarf again? Do act you age and get up at once! Now then, never mind old Bubbles, just make sure she has plenty of carrot champagne and peanuts while she waits. There is something we need to discuss.” Liz was uncharacteristically businesslike. “Something has gone horribly wrong and it will only get worse if we don’t nip it in the bud.”

                      “Oh?”

                      “This,” said Liz with a grand sweep of her arm, “This is my haven. This thread is sacrosanct. This is where the stories come from. This is not,” she glared sternly at the diminutive personage before her, “Not where the stories come TO. I’ve just about had enough of stories and other threads knocking on my door and sitting on my threadbare sofas quaffing carrot champagne at the expense of the tranquility I require in which to direct my characters.”

                      “I see. Shall I tell her to bugger off then?”

                      “I haven’t finished my diatribe!”

                      “Oh, right ho then. Carry on.”

                      “How am I supposed to keep the characters entertained and productive, not to mention in their own stories and not blundering about haphazardly, with all these interruptions?”

                      “If I may be so bold as to interrupt Madam,” interrupted Finnley with another curtsy, “Why don’t you just delete them all?”

                      “Don’t be silly, I never delete.”

                      #3963
                      TracyTracy
                      Participant

                        “Now then, you lot! Where were we?” cried Aunt Idle. “Everyone, back on the right thread, if you please! No cackling!”

                        But Idle was quite alone. Her words echoed off the walls forlornly. There were no characters here anymore ~ it was a ghost town.

                        #3947

                        Mike wasn’t as courageous as his former self, the Baron. That new name had a cowardly undertone which wasn’t as enticing to craze and bravery as “The Baron”.

                        The idea of the looming limbo which had swallowed the man whole, and having to care for a little girl who surely shouldn’t be out there on her own at such an early hour of the day spelt in unequivocal letters “T-R-O-U-B-B-L-E” — ah, and that he was barely literate wasn’t an improvement on the character either.

                        Mike didn’t want to think to much. He could remember a past, maybe even a future, and be bound by them. As well, he probably had a family, and the mere though of it would be enough to conjure up a boring wife named Tina, and six or seven… he had to stop now. Self introspection wasn’t good for him, he would get lost in it in quicker and surer ways than if he’d run into that Limbo.

                        “Let me tell you something… Prune?… Prune is it?”
                        “I stop you right there, mister, we don’t have time for the “shouldn’t be here on your own” talk, there is a man to catch, and maybe more where he hides.”

                        “Little girl, this is not my battle, I know a lost cause when I see one. You look exhausted, and I told my wife I would be back with her bloody croissants before she wakes up. You can’t imagine the dragon she becomes if she doesn’t get her croissants and coffee when she wakes up. My pick-up is over there, I can offer you a lift.”

                        Prune made a frown and a annoyed pout. At her age, she surely should know better than pout. The thought of the dragon-wife made her smile though, she sounded just like Mater when she was out of vegemite and toasts.

                        Prune started to have a sense of when characters appearing in her life were just plot devices conjured out of thin air. Mike had potential, but somehow had just folded back into a self-imposed routine, and had become just a part of the story background. She’d better let him go until just finds a real character. She could start by doing a stake-out next to the strange glowing building near the frontier.

                        “It’s OK mister, you go back to your wife, I’ll wait a little longer at the border. Something tells me this story just got started.”

                        #3946

                        In reply to: Mandala of Ascensions

                        At the same time, and in a different space, Floverley was trying to help some characters out of the limbo state of forgetfulness.

                        To lure them out of the woodwork, and offer them a much needed sexying-up, she had set up a luminary booth at the fringe of the Limbo states next to Nowherehampton, which stated in unapologetic fluorescent neon lights “FREE MAKEOVER” and in little letters “(hugs NOT complimentary)”.

                        As far as she’d found, the little In Sects were still in winter slumber, and her business was at a crawl that she wanted to consider switching strategies, not that she was big on strategies, only needing but one “go with the flove”.

                        Anyhow, the ring of the sudden distraction with Master John and Dispersee would surely do as well as a round of aura cleaning duties.

                        #3934
                        ÉricÉric
                        Keymaster

                          “Why do you suffer pain? You have compressed yourself into a form and an identity, hence the suffering. You pursue spirituality from the same limited and conditioned standpoint and hence you cannot secure any foothold in these pursuits. In whatever subject you are absorbed, you deal with it from the standpoint of a personalized entity, and not as dynamic manifest consciousness…”

                          “Hear that Liz’ ?” Godfrey beamed in delight “It was not Roberto or any bloody character, it was only your dynamic manifest consciousness!”
                          “In other words, are you saying it was all my fault again, cheeky blithering fool?” Liz’ couldn’t contain her petulance.

                          “I think you’re missing the point, dear,… but yes.” He added after a dramatic pause “or you can blame it on Cynchtia Dipity, or her twin sister, Serene.”

                          #3932
                          TracyTracy
                          Participant

                            “Godfrey, what on earth are you mumbling about now, while that man is running around the grounds with a rubber duck in his hands! Please do focus on the matter at hand! He’s stumbled into the wrong thread, surely?”

                            Elizabeth wrung her hands. “The characters are all running amok!”

                            The Roberto story had been finished long ago ~ or had it?

                            Finnley would know. But where was she?

                            #3931
                            TracyTracy
                            Participant

                              Prune turned to look back at Quentin as she made her way home. He’d have been better off waiting for a new chapter in the refugee story, instead of blundering into that limbo with that daft smile on his face. What a silly monkey, she thought, scratching under her arms and making chimpanzee noises at the retreating figure. Look at him, scampering along gazing up into the treetops, instead of watching his step.

                              A deep barking laugh behind her made her freeze, with her arms akimbo like teapot handles. Slowly she turned around, wondering why she hadn’t noticed anyone else on the track a moment before.

                              “Who are you?” she asked bluntly. “I’m Prune, and he’s Quentin,” she pointed to the disappearing man, “And he’s on the run. There’s a reward for his capture, but I can’t catch him on my own.” Prune almost cackled and hid the smirk behind her forearm, pretending to wipe her nose on it. She wondered where the lies came from, sometimes. It wasn’t like she planned them ~ well, sometimes she did ~ but often they just came tumbling out. It wasn’t a complete lie, anyway: there was no reward, but he could be detained for deserting his new story, if anyone cared to report it.

                              The man previously known as the Baron introduced himself as Mike O’Drooly. “I’m a story refugee,” he admitted.

                              “Bloody hell, not another one,” replied Prune. Then she had an idea. “If you help me capture Quentin, you’ll get a much better character in the new story.”

                              “I’ve nothing left to lose, child. And no idea what my story will be or what role I will play.” Perhaps it’s already started, he wondered.

                              “Come on, then! If we don’t catch him quick we might all end up without a story.”

                              #3929
                              ÉricÉric
                              Keymaster

                                “You should have thought about it before sending me for a spying mission, you daft tart” Prune was rehearsing in her head all the banter she would surely shower Aunt Idle with, thinking about how Mater would be railing if she noticed she was gone unattended for so long.
                                Mater could get a heart attack, bless her frail condition. Dido would surely get caned for this. Or canned, and pickled, of they could find enough vinegar (and big enough a jar).

                                In actuality, she wasn’t mad at Dido. She may even have voluntarily misconstrued her garbled words to use them as an excuse to slip out of the house under false pretense. Likely Dido wouldn’t be able to tell either way.

                                Seeing the weird Quentin character mumbling and struggling with his paranoia, she wouldn’t stay with him too long. Plus, he was straying dangerously into the dreamtime limbo, and even at her age, she was knowing full well how unwise it would be to continue with all the pointers urging to turn back or chose any other direction but the one he adamantly insisted to go towards, seeing the growing unease on the young girl’s face.

                                “Get lost or cackle all you might, as all lost is hoped.” were her words when she parted ways with the strange man. She would have sworn she was quoting one of Mater’s renown one-liners.

                                With some chance, she would be back unnoticed for breakfast.

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